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I stand on the Edge
Looking down to the core
Where I see a girl
She's brave
And smart
And pretty
The core knows
Who I want to be
And the Edge
Is the only thing
Between me
And who I want to be
But I'm afraid
Afraid of jumping
Of never turning back
Of making a mistake
Of hurting myself
I want
More than anything
To be able to jump
Over the Edge
And be who I always see
Be who I want to be
A poem I wrote in literal minutes. Minus that fact, I'm pretty proud of it.

It describes my feelings of being afraid to be myself. Maybe someday I'll find the courage to jump over the Edge.

I hope you do.
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:icontwihungercity17:
TwiHungerCity17 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Inspiring~
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:icontrainertimpani:
TrainerTimpani Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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WriterBlock233 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Friends: Are doubting that you can jump.

Best Friends: Are there jumping next to you.

WriterBlock: I'm jumping! Come on lets go! *Jumps off cliff.* :bounce:
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:icontrainertimpani:
TrainerTimpani Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! True. You sound like an awesome person!
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:iconhorobinota:
Horobinota Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry. But I have to.

"LEAP OF FAAAAAIIIIIITTTHHH!!!!!!!!!"
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:icontrainertimpani:
TrainerTimpani Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I saw that coming. And I'm supposed to be the faithful one! You're the untrusting voice of reason! Why can't I jump?
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